Wolfgang's manga / #murderer(3)

Clark is everything I ever wanted in a neurotic character type (psycho-thrillers tend to have a character that doesn't display normal emotions/reactions to abnormal situations). They aren't some radical type of character, their personalities are realistic to the point that people like them could exist in reality. Their push-and-pull relationship matched perfectly and all their decisions didn't seem out of the ordinary. The only complaint I have is wishing the author would've gone into more detail with their words to add more feeling but this is a webtoon, not a novel so I understand.

Ok this was a great idea for a horror/gore/smut/yaoi but it was horribly executed This wasn't written well at all. The panels were way too close together, too much text with little direction, and it was confusing more than scary imo. There characters weren't even given a set motive or a reason as to why they acted that way which is one of the main selling point of psychological stories. ngl I kinda laughed because there was no way I could take all this angst seriously. It's like the author tried to shove in as much as possible in a one shot which obviously didn't work. The art style was really good though and it fit with the theme. Sorry for getting heated but you had to know.

people see one gun and they're like OMG ACTION WOWEE ACTION YAOI IT MUST BE GOOD get ahold of yourself and notice how fucking shit the writing is. I mean the fact that the first ever panel is a sex scene says a LOT. All they do is fuck for someone dealing with a literal criminal. Also the author is so intentionally vague. Name all the handguns, pistols, and rifles you want, it's not gonna change how apparent it is that you put together a half assed plot.