Ok this was a great idea for a horror/gore/smut/yaoi but it was horribly executed
This wasn't written well at all. The panels were way too close together, too much text with little direction, and it was confusing more than scary imo. There characters weren't even given a set motive or a reason as to why they acted that way which is one of the main selling point of psychological stories. ngl I kinda laughed because there was no way I could take all this angst seriously. It's like the author tried to shove in as much as possible in a one shot which obviously didn't work. The art style was really good though and it fit with the theme.
Sorry for getting heated but you had to know.
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