Crispy_Robin's manga / #Unrequited love(121)

Loved the story....it was really beautiful..... honestly would have loved it more if they showed us some scenes b4 the seme confessed to the uke.....would have also liked if there were scenes from seme's POV

It felt really incomplete.....I wanted a flashback of their story tbh(since the uke told the seme he saved the uke).....liked the fact that the uke stayed in unrequited love with the seme for 10 years straight.....but the fact that there is no particular reason to it....it just doesn't feel ok....like they didn't even show us how and when the uke fell in love with the seme....also the fact that the seme realized that he loved the uke after kinda confessing to him felt weird....didn't like the fact that he was like "oh ,I love him" after meeting his colleague who was kinda hitting on him.....it was as if the kiss he retaliated to the uke and when uke told that he wouldn't be able to kiss anyone else if the seme did that, the seme replied that the uke didn't need to and he said that without being aware of his feelings didn't make sense tbh....the base of the plot was really good....but didn't like the way it was executed....I wanted them to actually keep contact with each other throughout the year rather than contacting (or seeing) each other only once a day

Had a really good story and was executed really well.....I liked the whole story and the main couple....I just thought that there would be problem with seme's father.....but that didn't happen....for some reason he wasn't even shown when he was kinda the one who was the reason of all the drama they went through (he told that homo was disgusting and that's the reason the seme never accepted the uke when the uke proposed even though he loved him cz the seme wanted that the uke find happiness by being in the right path which was having a normal relationship)....I kinda didn't like the affair that uke had with a married women in order to fill his heart that was broken by the seme(the woman wanted to do the same but still it just didn't feel well)....

It was good....and really sad....I wanted more of the first couple tbh....the second couple was cute....and since it was an one shot I thought it would be rushed but it wasn't....which was good....loved the pacing of both couple.....but I wanted to see some fluffiness between them after the angst and drama they went through....it would have been just awesome if they had some afterwards story

It was good and cute....liked the characters but didn't feel really attached to it....there was nothing special or anything.....it was just a cute story over all

It was very good.... Liked the main story....that was really cute.....but loved the one shot more...I wanted more of that....would have been great if there was another story about them....also should have shown how the uke got his heart broken before(the story have love rash which appears Infront of someone u love....and well it would appear infront of the seme and seme didn't wanna trust anyone with love rash because apparently he was heartbroken in the past because of that but never was elaborated on it....it was an one shot after all).....the main couple was very good too....it was nice seeing how the uke was in love with the seme for long and would like always hear the seme talking about his love life.....kinda felt frustrating when the seme kept going back and forth in his thought whether he loved the uke or not .....like he thought what he felt for uke was love at one moment and the next he wasn't sure what it was(kinda understandable too since he stopped feeling love from age 8 when he got love rash and well started taking medicine which inhibit his feeling of love to surface.....and then it got all clear to him when he heard from uke's mom that he got the rash in the first place bcz of uke....and he had forgotten that b4)....really wanted to see their parents reaction to them dating(I wanted the parents to go something along the line we have always known u would be together.....like they have been childhood frnds and have hung out with each other like forever)

It's a masterpiece.....It is sooo cute And the uke is precious....I am waaayy too curious about what kogane told about the seme at 4th chap.....but other than that it's waaayyyy too cute...love the whole story

It was fine....but like didn't like the seme very much....also some mysteries were like unsolved....I really wanted to know what happened to uke's mom...she just disappeared suddenly....

It was fine...the story base was really good....would have loved it if it had more plots.... everything felt to rush....wanted to see some dramas going on between them

It was fine....would have loved it more if it had more chaps....the way uke realized his feelings just felt weird....liked the first chap....it was good but the second chap became bad....like literally would have liked it more if uke's feelings took some time and the way it was expressed wasn't like that.... honestly it didn't make sense...like how after the seme told the uke he loved him....the uke realized he was always looking at seme(which was like 6 yrs ago)...just didn't make sense(=_=)