Crispy_Robin's manga / #Twisted(6)

It was good.....it was great actually.....but then there is 5th chap.... It was a one shot.... The story was really bad ... Didn't make any sense..... Completely twisted likeb what the fuck was even that..... The main story was really cute and then there had to be that one.... Had no ending..... Was downright bad, wouldn't be wrong too call it horrible..... Well the main story was actually great..... Cute and wholesome actually..... The seme was actually a pervert and kinda stalker but it was still enjoyable.... Liked him for some reason..... Love seme's and uke's interaction..... Specially how seme is really honest and says whatever he wants (the fact that he directly says that he jerked off while thinking of uke is weird and funny at the same time).... Also loved how it showed that the seme always had eyes on the uke even though there was a misunderstanding (uke had helped seme in a train previously when seme was in middle school and uke was in high school at that time.... Seme had better sense of smell than others from childhood..... And he enrolled in uke's highschool and tried to find him through his smell.... And once uke's friend wore uke's tracksuit, resulting the seme misunderstanding from the smell that uke's friend was the one who has helped him.....)

It was great.....I loved it a lottt....I cried so hard when the seme attempted suicide after the uke told him to die(╥﹏╥)....so glad that it was a happy ending.....I just love them a lot.....this is one of the best.....would have loved it a lot more if we could see more of the second couple....just love it

It was fine.... The first story was the best out of all.....it's just in the first story the seme proposed but the uke didn't respond ....I wanted more of it.... The story was quite interesting and unique and wanted to see more of the couple .....wanted them as a couple sooo bad....also the part where the seme was like it's only 5 seconds I have been captivated by you for 16 years was sooo good(the uke had the power to copy sexual urge of people when he looked at their eyes for 6 seconds and in that six seconds the person would get captivated by him....when the seme didn't get captivated the uke asked the reason and the seme answered that) Didn't really like the second story much.....it was not only incest but twincest....damn....tho liked the opposite yet similar part(they had opposite personality...so kinda like opposite attract but were in love with each other so similar as they r twins and it is abnormal for them to fall in love with each other) The third story was also twisted but I ended up kinda liking it.....would have liked to a see a series about them ngl....like both stalking each other kinda feels nice....it kinda felt cool how the seme kept hidden camera in uke's house(although they were not hidden as they were pretty much visible and the uke knew about it)....like it was cool The fourth story was really twisted....damn like how all three were masochist....tho in the last scene it was kinda concerning to see one of them held a saw(it definitely wasn't saw but looked like one)....kinda wanted one of them getting banged by two together ngl(like two of them love one....and that guy literally liked pain....and so for him the other two started beating each other up....and then also started having sex....which that guy came to know and was like lemme in on ur secret too....and then both ended up having sex with him....the guy came to know the truth....and then at the end both were like tell us your secret...which was getting beaten up duh) Kinda wanted to see the orgy in the fifth one ngl....also wanted to know if the actor ended up being a normal one or remained an AV actor....like he was an gay AV actor who used to top(and a raining AV actor at that too....cz he was good at not ejaculating).....and used to held guys who had similar look to the camera man (who was his friend and apparently his love interest)....and then the cameraman ended up fucking him(he wanted to held the camera man though) and also filmed that(he ejaculated a lot at that time) and then they showed a release of his new movie(which was really famous and didn't look like an AV movie)

What the fuck was that......it was completely ewwwwwww......just ewwww

It was very bad....felt like a hentai...felt like no story whatsoever.....and everything was all over the place....kinda like the story telling was really bad....the art was bad...like overly drawn bara...kinda wished the friend would actually fuck uke too(or at least try to).... At least it would be a threesome (like the seme was fucking the uke and making the uke cut all ties with everyone else and then uke's friend came and saw that the seme was fucking uke and the seme was like uke is mine get out....but then the seme was like you don't wanna get out? Then stand here and watch how I fuck my brother)

It was very bad... The first story was something I hoped I didn't read(felt same during the re-read)...it just didn't make any sense.... literally no sense....some plots were completely unnecessary.....I just felt that uke loving his dad part was bad....and the way he said it to seme was worse....and then r8 after the uke coming to know about his dad's marriage then having sex with seme and then instantly thinking that he just adored his dad but fell for seme was the worst part(uke was literally crying when he had sex with the seme).....I honestly liked the part when the seme told the uke that he will see uke as his brother from now on and the uke was being conscious about it....but the uke's feeling just didn't make sense....would have loved that part without those previous part.... The second story felt really rushed since it was only 2 chaps.....I liked the story base....would have loved it more if the couple's relationship was a lil bit more slow paced.....it felt like their feelings were really rushed(especially the uke's)...