It was fine......I wanted to see the story from seme's POV too( ･ั﹏･ั).....wanted to know when he fell in love with the uke and the reason etc.....and also would have loved to see the seme and uke feeling rejected ....like when he came to have feelings about seme and at that time seme were to pull back(especially since the uke cried after the seme pushed the uke....the seme kinda force kissed uke and well the uke started crying and the seme felt guilty but much wasn't shown) or they would have some kinda misunderstanding(the seme did think the uke hated him....but since everything was from uke's POV...it didn't seem sad enough).....
Iyaya Iyaya mo Suki no Uchi?