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Crispy_Robin's manga / #Fantasy(1)

Midnight Make Love

Complete | YOSHIDAYA Roku | 2016 released

It was average.... multiple stories made it hard to rate it The first story was good.....would have loved it more if there were more details about them....the uke took the seme to a room when their coffin was small(they were vampires) and then told that it was his room when he was alive....I wanted to see how he lived when he was alive and wanted to know that why and how did he turn vampire when he was human at first The story was bad....it ended in a cliffhanger... honestly speaking it kinda did not make sense as to why the uke had such an illusion of going inside a fairy tale book he used to enjoy as a child.....and he ended up having sex with a rabbit(half rabbit half human type)....wanted to see the seme's and uke's relation at the actual world since we saw the seme as a student of uke's school and the seme told the uke during his illusion that it was time for them to meet in the real world..... The third story was fine.... honestly it lacked more chapters ...the story was good but lack of chapter made it seem like it was rushed.....would have love to see things from seme's POV and more of their interaction The fourth story was bad.....the story felt really rushed, un-paced and weird.....while the seme was sexually assaulting uke he started crying and there was no reason given for it....and then after that the uke started yearning for him and he told the seme that he will take care of him(the seme).... honestly didn't make sense as to why he wanted to take care of someone who assaulted him and moreover had an open ending....the seme didn't even reply The fifth story was good....it was cute....the story felt a little unnatural and fast-paced.....would have loved it if there was more to the characters and if they would show more of uke and seme's conversation before they fell in love....it just happened so fast The sixth one was good too.....It was super fast-paced....like I don't understand as to how they fell in love with each other in their first walk(the uke wanted to boost his confidence by wearing heels....he used to wear it at his home....the seme and uke were neighbors and due to the noise the seme got irritated and went to ask the uke to stop the noise...he thought it was uke's gf or something....and by his surprise it was the uke and the seme told he would help uke by taking him to walk during night) ..I would have loved it more if they had went on more walks and then finally loving each other.....it was honestly really fast-paced.....also cute 7th story was fine....wanted to know the pretext of everything tbh.... specially how the seme started to like the uke and all....it felt like they were already in love with each other from the start(the seme was completely....uke might have developed during the story)... Every story needed more chapters and more moment tbh.....just felt really incomplete