Crispy_Robin's manga / #Editor(2)

It was average....liked the story but didn't feel satisfactory enough....really wanted to see some angst between them(which was kinda there at the same time wasn't there....though was pretty much sure that the kinda I was hoping for wouldn't happen....so wasn't really disappointed) and wanted to see the uke blush(he was a kinda really serious guy....like throughout the first season it was the seme trying to make uke's heart beat but it ended up his heart beating faster)....even though ended up getting what I was hoping for it kinda felt unsatisfactory (moreover it was on the same chapter).....like it kinda felt rushed.... throughout the time it was like the uke was trying to find out what love is(somehow ended up being a bro-con which I kinda didn't see coming....but not really out of character) and was all repressed about his feeling and out of nowhere it showed that he loves the seme(felt rushed)....it kinda felt like he didn't take much time to sort his feeling out(and was really hoping he would feel something after he ended it with the seme....like he ended up taking a temporary hiatus and so as a result their editor-mangaka relationship wasn't there....he was staying with the seme and ended up leaving at that time too).....also kinda didn't like it how the uke took seme's confession as a joke(not in a bad way....he just thought the seme was joking when he confessed as he was acting like nothing afterward....but the thing was the reason why they had fall out was because the seme proposed and uke didn't understand it(he was trying to find out what love is)....it also kinda felt like uke's character took a 180 turn(like literally he started kinda blushing non-stop after going out with seme....I did want him to blush but not that much....once in a while as he is a serious type of person.....)....was actually also hoping to see more of them after they started going out(but the extra was about uke's brother who is from the parent story....it was good but wanted to see the main couple)

It was fine....the ending was really disappointing.....hated how they didn't end up in relationship(the seme called the uke his lover and the uke was like it's still a trial period and they r not yet dating).....it kinda had a really good story for angst but there wasn't much angst....like I really wanted to see the uke brood over seme and then the seme kinda ignore uke(the uke loved the seme but the seme only wanted a casual relationship....and then after knowing about the fact the seme loved the uke, they had sex....the seme wanted to take responsibility and all but the uke didn't want it....he was being pushy and then the uke later on agreed for 3 month contract).....also wanted to see a story of uke's frnd....