Crispy_Robin's manga / #Dessert(2)

It was good...... The first story was fine.....did not understand how the uke fell in love with the seme....like I felt the seme needed something like a redemption arc(ik it's small to have a redemption arc but still there could be a chapter regarding his redemption).....the uke felt a really demeanor type of person but somehow gave into the seme without any reason....which felt really weird.... The second story was very good....wanted more of it... It was honestly cute......the alien was super cute and loved how their relationship went....loved how the seme reacted when he came to know that he loved the uke and that he was ashamed to face the uke....would have loved it more if they had some more misunderstanding tbh

It was good....it felt incomplete.....the guy who created trouble for the uke wasn't completely punished(he tried to kill uke....didn't get enough punishment....only grounded)....there seemed to be action without action in it....like the whole drama wasn't complete....the seme decided to protect the uke from his aunt(her mom's best friend who apparently loved her mom....I think and consider the uke as her substitute as they look similar)but there was nothing more to it.....it was as if the storm wasn't shown(it felt like the beginning.....need a sequel with be as a villainess ngl....)....kinda liked how they showed her and seme similar ngl(obsessive type....since uke looks like her mom she wanted to keep him and the seme thought he would do the same if the uke died)....loved the story of seme and his brother ngl(was really glad that seme's brother started living with them).........I really wanted a story of the seme's brother....it would be great if he had a spin-off