It was fine
The first couple was good...it was wholesome....the seme was really cute....loved how at the end to bif farewell to the uke he took of his bunny head(he used to wear it so that others can't see his face and then after they started dating they had a fight as the seme wasn't really showing his face...the uke got angry and was like don't wear the head....later on they ended up not talking for a week.....after reconciling the seme took off his bunny head while bidding uke bye)...
The second couple was bad(they didn't end up together)......wanted more of them...I wanted them to actually end up together and see more of them....it would be awesome to see them going out.......the basic story was good....would like it if one of them would realize he loves the other and then they would end up together it would be very good....
The third couple was fine....I wanted a lil drama for some reason.... probably bcz it was bcz they were childhood friends (maybe?)...it wasn't stated but I think they were....it would be awesome seeing some drama between them(especially the part the seme thought the uke didn't love him....as the seme would always be the one to initiate everything and also he was the one who proposed....he thought the uke might have been going out with the seme out of pity....wanted some angst at that moment.... unfortunately it resolved quickly.....well it was an one shot after all)....also wanted to see how they started going out
Hana To Usagi