Crispy_Robin's manga / #Delivery man(3)

It was very good.... Loved the first couple....they were cute....tho was hoping that ichimaru(he had unrequited feeling for uke) found someone at the end....and also wanted to see uke's uncle properly accept them..... Second couple was also good....but I was hoping for the uke to feel sad more....I wanted to seme to pull off(he was going after uke for a couple of years)....and then uke would feel sad.... I wanted the other two tenants(they were girl and were their neighbors) to be together too....it would be great

It was very good.....really wholesome....liked how when the uke was saying that he wanted to have similarity with his parents(his dad was an Italian and mom was japanese....he went to Japan after hearing different stories about japan from his mom....he also wanted to have a japanese partner....his dad for her mom at first sight.....)the seme thought that uke wanted a bride(just like his dad) and ended up trying to distance himself because he was in love with the uke(also ended up kissing uke as in a warning so that uke don't meet up with him anymore).....liked how when the uke replied it felt like he was taking pity on seme(he was saying like "do what you want" as in saying like he had no other choice cz he couldn't reject seme.....but it was because of bad vocabulary instead he did love the seme....not out of pity)....the extra where the uke was jealous was sooo cute(the seme ended up breaking up with his GF at the start....it was kinda his fault and also the GF's fault....he was way too into work that he was ignoring her and in anger she ended up saying bad thing about farmers... retaliating he was also rude....uke knew it....after getting together with the uke he went there and apologized and she also apologized....uke was there and saw it and got really jealous)....was funny seeing him jealous ngl

It was fine The first couple was good...it was wholesome....the seme was really cute....loved how at the end to bif farewell to the uke he took of his bunny head(he used to wear it so that others can't see his face and then after they started dating they had a fight as the seme wasn't really showing his face...the uke got angry and was like don't wear the head....later on they ended up not talking for a week.....after reconciling the seme took off his bunny head while bidding uke bye)... The second couple was bad(they didn't end up together)......wanted more of them...I wanted them to actually end up together and see more of them....it would be awesome to see them going out.......the basic story was good....would like it if one of them would realize he loves the other and then they would end up together it would be very good.... The third couple was fine....I wanted a lil drama for some reason.... probably bcz it was bcz they were childhood friends (maybe?)...it wasn't stated but I think they were....it would be awesome seeing some drama between them(especially the part the seme thought the uke didn't love him....as the seme would always be the one to initiate everything and also he was the one who proposed....he thought the uke might have been going out with the seme out of pity....wanted some angst at that moment.... unfortunately it resolved quickly.....well it was an one shot after all)....also wanted to see how they started going out