Crispy_Robin's manga / #Bi X gay(3)

It was fine....the story was kinda all over the place....like it kept on jumbling from uke's POV to seme's POV.....was confused when the uke was like the seme was being a pretend lover, lying and all(basically not trusting him).....and was sad when he was actually hoping that the uke, seme and uke's daughter would be family(looking forward to it) when the seme asked the uke to date him and was like I imagined dating you and all....well when we came to see things from seme's POV it was shown that seme was frivolous type of person and didn't really have interest in anyone but then again uke's thinking didn't make sense(not like uke knew seme's past or anything like that).....the kid was sooo cute....loved her...

It was good.... The first story was fine....wanted more of them....would have loved it better if they had more scenes....the part where the seme ended up thinking that he was hated by the uke because he was being impatient and so ended up saying uke that they shouldn't meet for some time was good(and then the uke thought that the seme might hate him)....the part where the original seme(or second couple's seme) was gonna pat the uke(he was aiming for him) and the seme got really jealous was funny(and then the 2nd seme ended up patting the seme and the uke got really possessive lol) The second story was the original one....and it was great...I love the story of the couple...love how seme and uke interacts.....the part when the thought of the uke hating the seme was really good(the uke was avoiding him....and then the bartender of the bar uke and seme frequents to said jokingly what if the uke ends up hating the seme for the fact that the seme was being sooo pushy....he and the uke both were actually top...and so he was being pushy and asking the uke to bottom for him)...loved that part....and then when he was asking uke to not hate him, the face he had was awesome.... The third story was average.....it was kinda fast paced....not like it was great but it wasn't bad either ....it felt really messy like it was all over the place....was actually hoping there would be more angst specially after the uke called the seme irritating kinda(the seme once saw the uke being forced by a guy to a hotel....from then on he kept on being by his side but keeping on saying that it was to protect him....but in truth seme loved the uke...uke didn't know...he was also in love with the seme btw ...and when he felt like the seme was only being kind to him and thought the seme didn't love him as he was straight he told him he was irritating)

It was good.... The main couple was fine....kinda didn't like how the uke just went with everything the seme asked for ...like he was such a big simp..... despite the seme literally telling him from the start that their shouldn't be feelings involved, he was constantly like what if he falls for me and was constantly thinking(he did this so he might love me etc etc....like a literal grade schooler)......he finally realized shits when he saw a picture that was crumbled in seme's house(basically seme got drunk and the uke took care of him.....at that time when the uke was gonna go, the seme ended up hold onto uke and asked uke not to go and called him hyung.....seme was in love with his hyung in the past and then the uke thought something might be wrong since uke was a junior.....and then saw the crumbled pic in seme's wardrobe....the pic was with three guy....one was seme, the other was seme's brother and last one was someone who uke loved in the past).....the chasing arc felt really small....like finally the uke was done going after the seme and decided to not give in but then gave in as soon as the seme was like "I love you".....it was like small.....wanted a bigger redemption arc(tho the seme didn't really do anything bad....I mean he said from the beginning that no feelings involved) The second couple was very good ....really loved them....wanted more of them....but their story could have been better(their story was the side story).....like I really liked the premise....but really wanted the seme to just keep on calling the uke for his stream and then end up kissing someone I gs....more like uke seeing the seme in a relationship would be better(the seme and uke was sm partner and would stream it in an adult streaming website....the seme proposed to the uke and the uke rejected saying he only wanted business relation with seme....the seme got angry and did a dangerous play and then was gonna nearly make him out of breath by choking him when the uke refused to say the safe word....the uke didn't say it out of pride....and then the seme stopped calling for the uke....later the uke met someone who was his type and when he told that someone about wanting to continue his relationship with the seme as his sm partner....that someone ended up saying he was fine with it and would even go with uke to take seme's approval about them being together ....then it turned out that someone is seme's previous am partner that seme kicked out and he approached the uke just to get to seme.....and then the seme told both of them to have sex Infront of him and the seme would choose the one he wanted as his uke....when while doing it the seme got involved and that someone ended up kissing seme, the uke said the safe word....and then seme kicked that someone again.....and then the uke told the reason y he rejected seme was cz he was afraid, since all his rltnship always ended in disaster and he didn't want his rltnship with seme to end ....)...