1st couple: about seme acting with his role model. The admiration starts turning into love. One day, he discovered the uke having sex with his boyfriend. This couple is very cute for me. Should have focus more on them rather than the 2nd couple.
2nd couple: tbh, I skip most of their scene bcuz the uke is a FRICKIN CHEATER! After uke have broken up with his lover, I feel bearable. I prefer watching him suffer actually. The side story for them is okay for me to read but still, he doesn't deserve the happy ending.
Overall: it's too fast and all over the place. The author cannot focus on too many characters. I've read tons of stories with 2nd couple but this is by far the worst! I skip most of the 2nd couple scenes
Behind the Scenes(monologue)