Jackalope's manga / #Dropped(6)

This is... bafflingly bad writing. And I can’t tell if the writing is this incoherent or the translation is not quite working. All the problems and conflicts have super easy solutions and none of the characters feel motivated. Literally can’t describe most of their personalities... not a good thing. Honestly, save your time and don’t read this.

Oh no. I hate this.

Had lots of potential, but really repetitive and bland characters. Had to drop it even though I used to be invested, since it just goes around in circles. Characters are weird (in a bad way) and revolve around boring protagonist, who doesn’t seem to have any thoughts of her own aside from obsessing over her dad or the plain white knight stereotype character... Asisi I think? They don’t develop much in any risky, interesting ways either. Even tho protagonist should have a life at some point, like after the time skip when she has more agency to do as she wants.... nope... gotta do the same shit forever. Don’t believe me? Pick a chapter, any chapter, and see if she’s solemnly wondering what’s wrong w either Asisi or Caitel. I dare you. It happens so often it could be a drinking game.

If you like unrealistic sex and really flat, disappointing endings, this author has got you. Character arcs? Who needs em! Women getting dominated and degraded verbally, physically, emotionally? This story has it all. This author hates women so much it shoots the moon into ‘this guy is compensating for something’ territory.

Yeah women don’t work this way at all. Glorifying rape. This should just be removed