abacate's manga / #Possessive lover(14)

I really liked the plot, some really fucked up shit happened, but that's the point of the manga. But there were some things that could be better written such as passage of time, the time skip to when the new salon was constructed was a little confusing, and the uke's opinion on his relationship with the seme, after finding out the truth, bc he suddenly just wasn't clueless anymore after the time skip. Also, the writer could have gone deeper on the whole "It's dirty" idea that came up all the time and was neve explained.

Didn't love it, It just wasn't it

Taishi goes to Haruomi ta really tall and unfriendly guy to asks advices on how to fix his short height and gain masculinity, hard suggests that he becomes his girlfriend. The idea of the plot is a bit forced and not realistic, but the story is so cute that it definitely makes up for it. Even tho haru is unfriendly he still has his really shy and cute sides, and taishi might be short and cute but once he realized his feelings he went straight for it and did not let him escape

I didn't really like it, the characters design, how they tried to make the seme all arrogant but idk didn't work for me, the brocon stuff I don't like and rarely will it be tolerable to me

It was a bit strange lol putting I demon I can live with it but i mean all his abilities other than eating words are just to make it easier for the mangaka to create something and other than that I really didn't see a need to make a thing out of the friend thing, not that big of a deal but ok, it was basically the seme being jealous lol Also, out of nowhere the demon is human like wtf you want it so he can stay in earth forever you need to create a universe before writing the story don't just write whatever so things are convenient for the ending you want. ALSO, this revolved so much around fucking but even that was confusing, there was a panel I thought he fingered him in the shower but then in bed it seemed like it was the first time and about the actual fucking I thought they had already done it but the whole conversation with the friend about how to do it happened and they fucked like what didn't they fuck the day before, so fucking confusing

Veggies I a fundanshi with a Chanel where he post pictures and videos of BL situations at his school. One day he receives a message from anonymous saying that he is a fan and wants to meet him in the science room, but to his surprise there he sees the most popular guy at school serizawa and a underclassman ukyo having sex, but it seems super abusive on seriawa's side. -Like for real this is super good lol yes serizawa was shit, he had a reason for being shit and the other guy understood and accepted instead of talking it out which sucks but if it didn't happen the manga also wouldn't happen so... my critique is that I needed some development for vegge and the blond guy, also needed a peek at his face and to see a healthy side to the other couple

The plot was very shallow, but since the seme was cute being shy in the end rs

This one is really good, but a bit more development would have made it better. The relationship felt superficial

Ahhhhh I actually really liked it the one with the stalker tho, the one with crossdressing I'm not really into that so I didn't really liked it

Pretty good if I may say so, super interesting