Maha's manga / #fantasy(736)

I used to really love this comic. As the story progresses I found that I lost interest the more the plot developed and took a turn that I didn’t expect. It’s a shame because the characters themselves are well written as well as the initial plot line. I was so invested in this and then it started to focus too much on one aspect of her abilities and lost sight of the end goal it seems.

I was going to wait to write my small review for this until I finished reading but honestly I’ve fallen in love with it. I really appreciate the familial aspect of this story and while not new, is executed beautifully. The FL has strong character and continues with her beliefs and learns from her mistakes. It’s refreshing to see a FL who isn’t perfect at everything and shows some character growth along the way. The supporting characters are also detailed and all of the ones introduced so far further the story as a whole and aren’t there for comedic relief or for trivial reasons. The story itself is written very well with no plot holes to my understanding and also interesting enough to stand out in an over saturated genre. Hopefully this story continues and doesn’t turn into just another noble love story.

It wasn’t bad per say it just wasn’t good either. The art itself is beautiful but that can’t save a sinking ship. The story line itself isn’t very well written out and ends up confusing more often than not. It might be a translation/editing issue understandably but I still get the feeling I’d still be confused even if mandarin was my first language.

Such a cute story! I found myself coming back to twist one a lot for comfort as it is a story line thats easy to understand as well as has characters who are well written out and have bold(?) personalities. Each arch of the story line is heartfelt and well written out, enough so that I felt myself sympathizing with the antagonist of the second arch. A solid story and something I think any isekai reader would enjoy. Highly recommend this one.