Maha's manga / #familial(246)

This story is really funny. The chapters are super short and honestly it’s kinda hard to follow because sometimes it feels like things are missing. But the main premise of the story is hilarious and entertaining enough to keep me reading. Light hearted and nothing to take too seriously.

A decent read. I myself won’t be finishing it but it wasn’t bad. The story line is interesting and has many plot points going on in both the background and main stage. However this can also hinder the growth of a comic as I myself find the growing number of plot points to be a little bit too drawn out for my tastes and it also lessens the impact of the original plot line. I honestly can’t say I remember what the goal was on the FL for sure but I can take a few guesses. Also because of just how dynamic this story is, it almost feels as if the characters are very surface level and don’t have too much going for them. I enjoyed the elements of reincarnation and the background of the ML, but other than the FL &ML, I find the characters personalities to be rather lacking. The art itself isn’t to great, which is a bummer because had it been better I believe I would’ve been able to continue reading this but not the worst I’ve seen as well. As I stated in the beginning not a bad reas, just not something I can see myself continuing to read any longer.

This story is really amazing and I highly recommend it so anyone really. The characters are unique and have depth to them, all with a unique background and circumstance that fits with well with the story. The story itself is well written and unique with multiple plot points that influence and accentuate the story arch’s beautifully. A flaw I’ve noticed is that things feel a bit drawn out. The MV that was introduced in the flashbacks in the beginning of the story hasn’t even been reintroduced and the story has surpassed 60 full chapters already. The biggest downfall of this is I’ve [SPOILER] read a few things and our FL is constantly fighting against her past/future to not be married to the prince and yet she still ends up with him in the end? It feels as if her struggle the whole time was for nothing. And yes I have a bias towards the 2nd ML but it still feels as if everything she works so hard to fight against is just tossed to the wind because she ends in the same situation. [SPOILER END] A good story with a eh ending.

I’m a bit torn as to whether I like this or not. It does have a lot of interesting ideas and themes going on, but this promo I felt did little justice to what the story’s actual quality might be. It felt like they tried to stuff too many elements into one chapter to appeal to as many people as possible in the limited space available. In the end, it creates a hectic and messy intro to the novel itself. It almost felt as it if was various variations of the same novel told with different twists but not one cohesive plot line. The art was beautiful and in the end it was what kept me from rating it any lower that I have.