david_holmes's manga / #Dirty talk(2)

Completed (read 6.5 chapters). 2 full penetrative sex scenes (first time c06 (+mentioned done 3 times) & 2nd c6.5; 2nd extra of c6.5 has reversi switch vibes though with uke wanting to fck seme and seme encouraging it but doing intercrural on seme instead). WOW LOTS OF RIMMING (3x)!! The more I read the more I realise I’ve read this way before. Uke wants to commission a costume for his game launch and asks the fashion club at his school but they are professional level costume designers so uke can’t pay the fee so seme (costume creator) asks uke to model his clothes for competitions as the payment. Turn out our very good-looking seme is a pervert with a body suit fetish (on men only but is also straight as naked men do nothing for him). Rimming (c05) (through clothes) (HOTTT). DEEP RIMMING (c06) (FCKKK SEME EATING OUT UKE’S ARSEHOLE WITH HIS FACE BURIED INSIDE UKE’S ARSE CHEEKS AND KNEADING HIS ARSE AND TONGUE-FUCKING proper arse eating from the back AND SAYING HE DOESN’T WANT TO USE LUBE AS HE DOESN’T WANT TO STOP SUCKING UKE’S ARSE AHHHHHH HOTTT!!). For someone who doesn’t get turned on by men without clothes he’s really going the mile haha, or uke makes him go utterly crazy with lust. PROPER ARSE EATING (c06&6.5). MORE DEEP RIMMING ARSE EATING (c6.5) WITH SEME SUCKING & TONGUE FUCKING UKE’S ARSEHOLE WHILE SPREAD FOLDED OVER ON HIS BACK AND SHOULDERS WHILE SEME EATS UKE’S ARSE!! SemePOV (c04 partial). Kishida Touma x Kuroe Youji. University students. Design College. 2nd year x 1st year. Fashion department x computer arts department. Clothing x graphic/character design. Fashion club x video game club. Costume Designer x Model. Clothes maker x model. Straight x uke. Cool x otaku. Handsome seme. Ikemen seme. Beautiful seme (but masculine). Super Cool seme. Trendy seme. Stylish seme. Fashionable seme. Famous seme (at university for his beauty and designs). Cool Hairstyle seme. Nice haircut seme. Two tone hair colour seme. Dyed hair seme. Piercings seme. Earrings seme. Drowsy type seme (like bored but more like a personified drawl). Fashion competitions winner seme. Clothing Fetish seme. Pervert seme. Panting pervert seme. Kink seme. Cute uke. Athletic build uke. Ex-swim club uke. Bully in bed seme. Horny seme. Escalating seme (is always forgiven by uke due to his ikemen powers and sad puppy face and keeps being more sexually demanding). Aggressive seme. Do S seme. Pushy seme. Erection seme (c03). Tenting trousers seme (c03). Masturbating seme (c04) (flashback as kid to when he got horny after seeing a bigger man in a bodysuit and jerked off thinking about it). Masturbating seme (c04) (when he gets so hard after kissing uke and freaking uke out that he runs away, he’s holding his erection and panting and looks like he’s about to wank). Sex beast seme. Rimming (c05) (doggystyle through tights). Erection seme (c05) (raging hard-on from kissing uke). Major tenting trousers seme (c05) (saying that kissing uke made him hard to the point of pain). Fucktalking seme. Seme saying he wants to chin right here inside uke while fingering him, ugh. Confession seme (c06) (saying he’s never felt this way for anyone and saying “I like you” over and over and over again). Rimming (c06) (proper arse eating from the back with seme’s face buried in uke’s arse cheeks while kneading uke’s sexy arse cheeks; and I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS SEXY PERVERTED SEME SAYS HE DOESN’T WANT TO USE LUBE BECAUSE HE DOESN’T WANT TO STOP SUCKING UKE’S ARSE AHHHHH; total 5x panels (3x shown) of arse eating, tongue-fucking). Barebacking. MORE DEEP RIMMING ARSE EATING (c6.5) (total 7x panels (2x shown) WITH SEME SUCKING & TONGUE FUCKING UKE’S ARSEHOLE WHILE SPREAD FOLDED OVER ON HIS BACK AND SHOULDERS WHILE SEME EATS UKE’S ARSE!!

Read complete (read 11.1 chapters). 5 full penetrative sex scenes (first time c02; 2nd c07 seme makes love to uke in bed; 3rd c09 hot hot fuck clothed with seme from behind Fucktalking about filling uke’s ass up after eating out his uke; 4th c10 naked in the shower I’m behind and then the front; 5th c11 after seme ate uke out from the back then naked with uke on top and then seme pounding into uke from the front). SEMESOINLUST & SEMESOINLOVE! Uke/SemePOV. Narikawa Kousuke x Yanai Ryouto. College students. Most handsome Number 1 x Most Handsome Number 2. Beauty pageant winner x runner-up. Straight x straight. Handsome seme. Gorgeous seme. Stunning seme. Hot seme. Popular seme. Cool seme. Stoic seme. Serious seme. Sullen seme. Loner seme. Antisocial seme. Brooding seme. Expressionless seme. Blunt seme. Not good expressing himself seme. Pro snowboarder Seme (even has a license and does tricks and was featured on snowboarding magazines). Same height (almost, seme is a wee bit taller but has much broader shoulders and athletic build than uke). Unrequited love seme. Onesided love seme. Longtime onesided secret love seme (3 years). Desperate seme (for uke and to be close to uke finding any way to get close to someone who is obviously trying to avoid him). Antisocial seme. Masturbating seme. Horny seme. Implied and depicted masturbation seme (admits jerking off to uke by watching their college beauty pageant DVD and after the fact with used tissues and getting hard-on watching uke on DVD). Amorous seme. Touchy feely seme. Aggressive seme. Jealous seme. RIMMING 2X (c9 & 11). Erection seme (tenting trousers cock straining while giving uke rimjob). Tall x tall. 5’11 x 5’10. Handsome uke. Pretty uke. Popular uke. Playboy uke. Excitable uke. Tsundere uke. Persistent uke. Onesided rivalry uke. Uke is popular with girls but seme always steals the spotlight scenario. Girls keep flocking effortlessly to seme and uke resents that and starts hating seme. Onesided rivalry with seme stems from the fact that seme is effortlessly cool, manly and gets all the girls. Seme goes to every mixer uke goes to, hmm, lol. There’s some pretty funny moments where lol’ed because of seme’s stoic-ness and lack of expressions but acting hilarious hahaha. This line from seme got me so shook (when he started his bewildering unrequited love and started masturbating to uke not understanding why): “Ryouto always seemed pissed when he looked at me... But laughed and had fun with the other guys. I went to those parties and did nothing... Just... stared at... the smiles Ryouto wouldn’t ever give me.” UGH MY HEARTTT. OMG, sexy beastly guiltless seme who’s so desperate for uke and in lust with uke that he jerks off to uke’s drunk sleeping form in a public bathroom during a mixer (c5.5). Hurt and misunderstandings ensue due to seme having the chance to train snowboarding in Canada. Canada seems to be a big plot point in this story, yay! Seme finally agrees to go after uke makes him not miss the chance. Rimming omg yes (chapter 9)! Usually condom sex became bareback creampie with seme fucktalking about uke feeling good from his licking (rimming), how good uke’s ass feels and how he’s gonna fill up uke’s ass (chapter 9), damn that’s hot! Whole thing kinda happened too fast for me. In that kissing and touching happened in the first chapter from being “enemies” (uke’s mind) to tolerable and suddenly seme kisses him to get some of the chapstick on uke’s lips, like huh? It was clear seme was interested in uke but I found this and that to have nothing to do with each other... Anyway, due to his resentment of seme getting all the girls he likes, uke starting ignoring seme at their college even though seme tried to get close to uke every chance he got, that’s why anti-social seme came to all of uke’s parties. Okay, I get why I was so annoyed with this story when it first started. I mentioned it started too fast right? Well, I’m reading chapter 4 and I can confirm IT DID (start too abruptly). Because chapter 4 is what got my fangirl squeeing in glee. This chapter is how it should have started. The author, editor wanted to start from the middle and work back to a flashback but the execution didn’t deliver. Like it really felt like I was started reading from the middle and I didn’t like that because I always felt it was rushed but now knowing how they’re relationship started, how they got to meet for the first time and how such a loner would ever even enter a college beauty pageant makes total sense now. It was all uke’s persistence. Maybe they wanted to start off with snow and snowboarding to stay true to the title but really they honestly should have started with chapter 4 (maybe but of how the college life and onesided rivalry with uke before for context). I mean, we still get to know how seme is a snowboarder and this chapter built the excitement you get from thinking “omg I’m going to love this so much!” which is what we should have felt from the beginning because this story IS GOOD. I’m honestly really annoyed with how poorly they structured it because I feel robbed of getting into a good story. Ugh, whatever it is, this was such a good story and definitely “E++” and maybe in my “F-“ if I feel . Seme is so in love with his uke waiting forever for 3 years, desperate to be near him and taking any chance he can get to be with uke even if uke hated him at the time but then uke also falls deeply in love with him being insecure about him going to Canada and all. Only thing lacking was the way it was presented which would have been so much better had they started NOT from the damn middle. And also wish we saw more of SemePOV (they only had one bonus chapter for his POV). Timelines were kinda confusing to me because I still don’t know if that first snowboarding trip where seme pounded on uke like a beast was after 3 years pining for him or if that was not long after he discovered he was in love and in lust with uke... Other than that it’s a lovely story and I love how he wants his uke so bad and rims him and makes him feel good.