Keki's manga / #Another World(150)

I didn't like the ending. I feel like i could've written a better one. There were question's left unanswered and things left unsaid. I feel like the readers knew more than the characters most of the story and that'ss how it ended as well.

I only got a couple pages in. I really excited to be the first one to give actual feed back on here. Spread the word guy. It looks really creepy and interesting.

This is sooo good