Kiss me, Liar
There are SO many wrong things here Idek where to start... Although it grabbed my interest at some point, is -overall- all over the place. First, the beginning was confusing and in you're face without giving you much context- I even thought there were missing chapters and had to double check but no, they just simply skipped it. Second, Things end being too convenient. I know it's just fiction, but c'mon at least there should be some complications that are not solved in a few panels lol On the other hand, the seme's attitude is kinda disgusting, even tho sometimes he's somewhat likable? It gives the idea that he's just not able to communicate well what he's feeling, but his actions are too rude and just terrible. RAPE but make it "romantic"? which is kinda uncomfortable ngl. The story introduces characters that we will never gonna see again, as well as we -somehow- don't remember very crucial information that may or may not affect the protagonist's health. And then, near the end, a lot of random things happen to attract attention that don't make sense AT ALL and are defitively unnecesary. It just feels out of place. Beware, there's a cult. Why? Idk either... It's mentioned in like 3 panels but somehow is very important. The only really likable character is Naomi. Please give her a main role. I'll read it. I'm a fan lol PD. but like in another manga with another author lmao
Missing Love