It's like reading a beautiful poem. I love it. Has a nice structure too with 3 main story chapters, followed by an extra that shows the couple down the line. I'm satisfied with what's present, but it would be nice to see more. Like chapters from Aka's perspective, or some adventures of the two
P.S.: Although the "dating a child you raised" concept can be uncomfortable, it's not pedophila and they have a period of years they don't see each other, so take that for what you will
Akatsubaki