Yipso's manga / #Interesting(2)

https://www.webtoons.com/en/horror/uriah/list?title_no=1607 No need to upload but thx for publicity

Story is not bad, ML is the dragon for sure, but he grows at an exponential rate. The FL sees him as a child so far. Anyways, the issue is with pacing and cleaning. It doesn't make sense in some parts, especially in chapter 13? 14? where they emphasized her hand. Why didn't he notice it earlier? Inconsistency runs rampant especially with the aunt and the general's pallete (hair color, skin color, etc.). When pacing and artwork are rushed, the webtoon starts to fail.