fushidfard's manga / #Oneshot(85)

according to soem of the comments the ending is actually a subversion of the usual teacher/students relationship trope and it's meant to be seen as unhealthy? well in my own reading i didn't catch that or really understand it and even though this story does have it's fucekd up parts (good), it could still use some better build up and foreshadowing (ie. for when it gets revealed that the sensei wants to fuck the student), so this gets a 2. would've been better (a 4!!) if it had jsut sttyed a oneshot

confusing

eh

liked this a lot more than i thought i would power bottoms my beloved

eh. don't liek these really brief oneshots (or as i like to call them, one-tenth shots) that just start in the middle of a situation. looking forward to reading the author's other works though assuming that they draw leg hair on their characters (or at least a smidgen of it. please.)

the smut's the only thing saving this from being a 1 (writing is rather lacklustre) but even then,,,,