Pfeos
it wasn’t bad, but it’s not amazing. the smut was good. the bottom was a bit weak willed, but that’s probably from his mindset as a slave. i wish he could express himself more. this story lacked communication between the uke and seme, which caused a lot of misunderstandings. it feels a bit rushed at the end. i wish there was side stories. spoiler : - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - the story was a bit lacking in that the queen was never revealed. it also didn’t show how julian died or how him and claude met. it didn’t show them clearing claude’s family’s name. they didn’t show the treasure island ( the whole point of the journey was to find the map pieces and go there ). it just feels like side stories should’ve been included. i wish the queen got punished or something. i don’t even know. it just ended too quickly. i feel like this story was only to show smut between a weak bottom and strong top.
The Rogue Prince Is Secretly an Omega