GlacierAnn's manga / #smut(109)

The story is kinda fun if you get over the fact that it’s compeltely unrealistic and in a lot of ways, messed up. For a story about a sex club, I’m really surprised in how little I cared about the sex scenes. The only ones I liked where when Yuri and the Stalker hook up, and the sexual tension between Kashima and Toono. Yaguchi is cute but I ship him with Tamura. As much as I love me some smut, I actually want a little more plot/character development. But, more than anything it’s a comedy. Overall, fun but don’t expect much. They hardly update.

It’s interesting. I don’t like the time skips and late explanations to what’s going on, like what happened after they got back together and Alex moved out, we didn’t find out till A LOT later that they decided to live together. Not sure how I feel about the gun and bat shit crazy stuff randomly popping in when there’s a stupid problem going on with Alex and Cole, sometimes it’s stupid and annoying, other times it makes the story interesting and thrilling, like what’s going to happen to Brad when Alex found out about that incident? Are we gonna get some killing stalking shit going on? I’m excited but at the same time, I don’t think this is a story where they’re gonna push it that far, it’s just edgy, not dark and gorey. I don’t like the over saturation of sex scenes, I think there should be somewhat of a balance of dating activities and That. How the hell do they stay together if all it is is sex and nothing else? And they live together?!? Don’t give me that bullshit, more domestic dating scenes please! But, all that said, I’m gonna come back once they update it, it’s different and I’ve invested too much to let it go. >< I wanna know what’s going to happen to Brad.

It’s basic, average, and unrealistic. Popular Guy can’t get turned on, chance encounter with movie club shy nerdy kid, sexually asults him, and can only get turned on by nerdy kid. They fall for each other, the end. Sex scene wasn’t even that explicit until the after story, thank god for the afterstory. One time read, kind of boring.

It was different so I gave it 4 stars, kind of predictable, and having sex tied up like that is actually really difficult and uncomfortable. The seme going back to the boss was stupid and didn’t make logical sense. The summery gist of this manga is that the seme is a yakuza that is in hiding at this uke’s house that does bdsm work rope tieing for film and modeling (sometimes for the yakuza). Seme has a low self esteem because he’s been abused all his life but he’s a hunk and the uke is horny but honest and gentle. They fall in love, face his issues, have a nice fuck and now they want to be devoted to eachother forever. The happy fucking end.

God I have so many things to say about this one..for starters, damn that was fucking good shit. It’s been a while since I’ve read a really good one. I wasn’t expecting much because I don’t really like manga revolving around the subject of porn but it blew me away! It went from stupid porn industry smut, to smutty relationship, but after the break up is when it started getting real and good. The aftermath of the exposure and breakup, to getting fired and the emotions he felt towards his ex lover, selling himself and getting raped, that was all too fucking real. The emotion was amazing! I will definitely reread this manga. I heard that it’s ending soon which is disappointing but they did a good job with the emotion. Couple of small criticisms tho. First, I think they could have dragged out more porn scenes (by that I mean make more before the mc and McQueen got together) since I don’t really find this to be a romance, tho there are some romantic elements it’s mainly just lots of uncensored fucking. Also, if they were so invested in their relationship wouldn’t the normal thing to do is offer to stay at his place? At least until he finds another place to stay since he’s so rich and all. Another thing about his money, McQueen was so transparent about his past so the normal thing would be for the mc to talk about his sad past and debt and McQueen asked about it (which looked like it at the beach scene but it cut off and later we find out that McQueen knows nothing about his past) that really frustrates me because if they were as serious as the manga portrays them to be, McQueen would have offered to pay off his debt, at least some. And for goodness sake, the mc acquired more than $50,000 dollars, how much more debt does he need to pay off for a simple hospital bill of a shattered ankle surgery?!?!? Unrealistic. They are this far into the relationship and he still hasn’t told McQueen about Liu, the debt, and the rape later?!? I also feel like they could have prolonged the relationship and the inner turmoil the mc and McQueen were feeling toward eachother, prolonged the breakup, prolonged the getting back on his feet, prolonged hinting Liu’s Secret feeling toward the mc, prolonged the getting back together aftermath since I have a feeling it’s going to end soon because I would have liked seeing McQueen suggesting the mc to audition and get a leading role and all that in between, basically I just with there was more emphasis, hints, on everything and I just want this to be longer because it has so much potential. I feel like it went by so fast and if it wasn’t for the breakup, the exposure, the emotions, and the rape I feel like this would have been an underaverage read. One last thing, is McQueen seriously not gonna find out the mc got raped by Liu? I liked the scene but I want to see some serious ass whopping, what he did was still wrong even if it’s hot in this fictional world.

Um, I don’t really like this one. Don’t like the story, how they first fuck and get together is super unrealistic, and the seme is just straight up fucking weird. Not gonna pick this one back up, it’s not for me. Basically they work at a cosmetic company, the manager/uke tries to get to know the underling/seme who is always antisocial by taking him out for a drink with other coworkers, then a brothel. He’s confused why the seme didn’t sleep with anyone so drags him to his house for relationship coaching but gets attacked and raped instead, girlfriend breaks up with uke, few more rapes happen but they make it look fluffy and comedic, seme confesses, they get together, I assume the rest in the future will be about their relationship drama at work, idk not gonna read it

They do it a little too often, needs more plot. The smut is hot but after a while it’s boring because it’s oversaturated. I kinda ship miyuki and ikumi, just seems like it’d be hotter than the main pairing. It’s honestly a little sad that the pregmen hate themselves because they don’t have any self control, wish I could see them fighting back more and denying rather than everyone going “no, but actually yes, fuck me daddy”

Ended on a stupid note

I don’t like the way the doctor and the older brother are portrayed, I think it should have been extended and the development slower. I mean I was really looking forward to the sex scene of an Alpha giving up his dominant side and committing a sexual act he’s never done before. It was rushed, I didn’t get to see any of it, and the doctor is just a cruel, manipulative bastard that took his virginity, it’s sad. EVERYTHING ELSE IS FUCKING AMAZING. there are quite a few sex scenes and I think they should cut down before the audience gets bored, but that’s just my opinion, for all I know everyone else is probably happily masterbating

It’s average, story was typical. Some of the sex scenes were nice and detailed. Some manga artists just draw 2 panels so I appreciate that this artist drew in more detail of what took place. Sex can be a whole lot of things, it’s not just one position and done (well it shouldn’t be cause that’s pretty boring) the fact that she drew elaborate situations was very accurate refreshing, and creative.