The Promise
Complete | 希尼,Cynnie | 2019 released
The whole story was really great, one of those types that I just couldn't put down. However I was disappointed by the ending. Don't get me wrong, the ending was good, it wasn’t bad, but I felt it could have been significantly better too. The last... IDK, 10 chapters or so felt rushed. There could've been like 10 or 20 chapters more and it'd be great. All the hype about Rockefeller made it feel like he'd be the "last boss", the person Jing Ye would have to fight to get out. Also a few chapters of what life is like in the Aboveground for our main couple would have been a fitting conclusion to their story.
Raising a Bat