i actually really like the art and i like the way shinobu talks for some reason however that's IT everything else was WEIRD. kakei is possessive as fuck and also straight up rapes shinobu in like everryyy scene except for... maybe two. i have no earthly idea why kakei decided to find a top instead of a bottom if he was just gonna be the top anyway?? is the author trying to say that he was inexperienced and didn't know he wanted those things until he started to have sex with shinobu?? 'cause that's dumb and the events after shouldn't have happened anyway, 'cause shinobu wasn't willing to bottom for him. this is just a very specific fantasy. also happy ending or something, couldn't give a shit kakei is weird asf for that.
He's A Better Top Than Me?!