noah's manga / #Crappy Plot(198)

5. S class hunter FL kills her colleague who was in love with her probs. Girlie reincarnates as a princess with lots of magic power and sees her family but it’s hard being a princess when people are out to get her. Same old set-up, but I smell poor generic writing on the way with how there are multiple obvious villain characters who are calling her stupid when she’s a baby. I did like that the FL was an S class fighter and not some office lady. But she’s a little on the immature side so far. Exploring what FL was like in her past life and why she cares about her family might’ve been better bc rn she’s just an annoying kid, even the serious moments felt dull bc of lack of context. ML is probs going to be the black haired FL guy. Might increase rating if this improves.

19. Horrendous translations but it doesn’t matter bc the plot is basic. Girl grows up in a cell and gets exploited for intel, gets a second chance and marries the half dragon duke for protection, charms the family but oh no half dragon family disappears so it’s not forever? Idk I don’t care

Trash ML who neglects and spoils his daughter and hired a “mother” for her instead. Weird mid story.

21

It’s stiff and kind of hard to follow. I don’t know what’s going on or why she wants to save everyone despite being in someone else’s body. It’s confusing and on top of that she’s already doing the whole “I can fix him” thing Girl let us know who you are at least. What is your personality like? Also not the ML saying “u got no shame?” when he’s the one half naked. Sir put on a bra.

there’s actually no romance. This is one of those stories where you’re wondering why did this bitch reincarnate as a character when the original MC was so much better and so much worthier of the ending she got. The maid is literally MCs half sibling bc the father is a cheating pos and instead of taking care of the maid, he made her a fucking servant to his daughter who was originally lazy and useless. Even though MC tries to study and take the ML, she’s fucking annoying and boring to read. Not only does she not deserve it there’s no chemistry with the ML. Annoying story. dropped.

1. Dumb MC who reincarnated 100+ times but acts like she’s 12 yo. 2. AGE GAP MC is a literal baby while ML is a grown ass man older than the pope himself. 3. Boring story about op character that reincarnates as another op character.