Zihvuda's manga / #yaoi(39)

Attempted suicide in this. But other than that, my god was this a good read! No rape! No emotional blackmail! No toxicity in the couple's relationship! It was lovely, happy endings are nice~

Cute and smutty! No love triangles, no rape, nothing toxic, just a couple being a couple.

Yep. Good. This is good. A very fun story with actual good art, a pushy top and a willing bottom. No rape-y undertones, just good smut. Wolf boy likes human, pursues human, the get together. This story can't be spoiled, it's too simple, and it's fucking great.

The translation is so bad I have no idea what is even happening in this manga. The alpha apparently manipulated the omega, the omega saw through it and then introduces the alpha to a better(?) mate to be left alone. The translation is awful and I have no idea about the details. Couldn't understand. Another scanlation group that apparently has no-one on staff that knows what english is, but still insists on translating things into "english". The "proofreader" and "editor" are completely superfluous. The reading experience is bad thanks to the terrible english, and the story (from what I managed to understand) wasn't that good either. I should have read the comments and given this a miss. At least this story didn't have the omega get raped, which is about the only good thing I can say about this story.

For an alphaXalpha story, the mc doesn't feel like an alpha at all. He's a super successful business man from a very strict family, yet he seems to be incredibly timid and unable to set any boundaries in this new sexual relationship he embarks on. He's incredibly meek, and in pretty much every panel is clutching at his chest wondering what is happening with hi emotions. This sort of thing is fine when the characters are young teenagers, but when it starts to be grown ass adults, it gets very grating. It's fine to be a little confused or wanting to do be in denial, but being that clueless is just.. ugh. The other guy is acting way too affectionate for a strictly contractual sexual relationship, and mc just doesn't call him out on any of it. That scene where they come across mc's acquaintance exiting the elevator at the hotel where Ash starts saying "maybe we should take this to yours or my place after this" was really frustrating because mc didn't call him out on it immediately. Like what is he being shy for when he was perfectly happy kissing mc in public or groping him in front of another dude at a bar. MC says nothing, doesn't call him out, just meekly says "ok, we'll just do that". Also the fact that Ash got in the way of Carlyle getting with that omega at the bar. Carlyle didn't call him out on that weirdness either. Even though Ash later says he doesn't care about how many sex partners he has, like??? Obviously, Ash, you do if you need to get all territorial like that. *sigh* I wish Carlyle wasn't so goddamn stupid. I get that he's extremely sheltered, but it's not like he has no social skills what so ever since he's such a successful businessman. He should be able to pick up on this shit, and call it out. (╬ಠ益ಠ)

This story contains rape. Story manages to be boring even as it's also trying to have surprises and be a story about a beta and an omega. The chemistry is lacking which makes the couple having sex feel rushed and bland. The scene where they confess their love for each other also lacks impact.

I don't get why the rating on this is so high. The fox gets a picture snapped of him, and instead of actually fighting the wolf, he just curses in his head but does nothing. I couldn't get passed 10 chapters cause it made no sense. MC doesn't want to tell anybody, but why is a total mystery. Also it wasn't a picture of him having sex, it was a picture of him on the bathroom floor with his pants around his ankles, it is nowhere near believable that it'd be enough to blackmail him into a blow job let alone anything else. My reaction would have been to call his bluff, cause it wasn't even a picture of him as a fox, and MC doesn't even seem to have a strong online presence to explain why the pic would have him that desperate. He literally could have told the wolf to fuck off and happily been on his merry way. Could have said "alright, you keep that photo, hope it's enough 'cause you ain't ever getting none of this." and walked away! Would have been way better of a story. As it is, it's just incredibly frustrating and stupid.

Like most of these omegaverse stories, this was stupid. The morals are all over the place. MC is traumatized and then pretty much victim blamed for being the way he is. He's a top and instead of respecting that, it's no but I'm your alpha so you'll submit to me and no-one else. His childhood friend reacts badly and then tries to drug him in public and abduct mc. And instead of calling it like it is, the mc (while drugged) apologizes to his obsessed stalker for "disappearing" after he was raped by his friend's sister. It'd be one thing if the friend had been an actual friend and was understanding, but he's obviously an obsessed stalker and I can't with this story. Also like some other people have said, the alpha doesn't have much personality and doesn't seem particularly affected by his fated mate. He just smirks and acts superior rather than caring. There's no chemistry between the main couple, the only good ting about this is the art, but if it's a good story you're looking for, give this a miss.

This was cute enough to read even though the translation wasn't really good. I ended up skipping most of the dialogue cause it didn't always make sense. Annoyingly there seemed to be a lot of misunderstandings and I don't understand how they made up in the end, the translation REALLY didn't help there which is unfortunate. Would have liked less miscommunication and more fluff to be honest, and a better translation would have been nicer. It's a shame an actual english speaker didn't work on this.

This is the first historical korean yaoi manhua I've read where there's no rape involved with the plot. The bar is so low this is what constitutes high praise in stories like this. V_V I like the main couple, although the art can be iffy at times, and the seme hiding stuff is kind of played out but, that's par for the course in these kinds of stories. The way they got together was so natural, and them loving on each other is great. This is almost exactly the kind of story I've been wanting from this kind of setting for a long time. Wish more of these stories were like this rather than resorting to rape as some sort of plot device. Haon is understandably naive, Gon is understandably traumatized. It's a good story, not great mind, but absolutely serviceable with the avalanche of crap we otherwise get. The art is a small issue. Characters look good, and the sex is drawn fine, but the action, in this action manhua isn't quite there, and that's a shame. Still, I do recommend it, if only until we get better yaoi stories for historical settings.