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I wish they went into the polygamy/harem aspect of this better. Like the love interest basically just lead the mc on, like he goes on a date with the mc then afterwards takes the mc to his house then bam he’s suddenly getting fucked by all his other partners?? I think he should’ve at least given a heads up or maybe just a “Hey i’m polyamorous relationship with the other members in our club, I like you but i’m not sure if you’re okay with polygamy so i’m just letting you know so I don’t lead you on.” I also just dislike the way the polygamy aspect was revealed, like a random scene of the love interest suddenly getting fucked by his other partners? Out of nowhere??Really??? And now the mc has to deal with this bs and ends up seeing them fucking around. Like you invited the mc to your house, can’t the dicking around wait until later? A nice simple conversation, with all of his partners present and the mc talking about consent and boundaries would’ve been much more pleasant to read. Like consent and boundaries is very important for any polyamorous relationship and that aspect just wasn’t shown very well in this manga. I get that this manga is just another shitty smut manga but like, the smut wasn’t even good. Like the sex scene was so random and abrupt?? There’s like no foreplay, no build-up, and the reader has absolutely no idea what the fuck’s going on. This story was so rushed that you barely got to know any of the characters. The faces, names, and personalities of the love interest’s other partners aren’t revealed, we know absolutely nothing about them which just contradicts the “I love all of you guys equally” statement. The mc is fine I guess, he’s not a god-awful character but he’s not good either. He’s just so bland and we know absolutely nothing about him, his interests, his hobbies, his backstory, etc... Anyways i’m ending this rant here since it’s like 12am and I just wanna go to sleep.

This is such a delightful read and I’m honestly so excited for the second volume! I love everything about this story—from the characters, their interactions with each-other, and just the general atmosphere. The two main characters have such lovely conversations with each-other and I find it wonderful how they’re able to communicate so clearly to one another. There’s also something about the general atmosphere about this story that I really love, this part from the authors note really describes it: “Also, I wanted to write a series that feels very atmospheric. About two guys meeting up, walking alongside each other, staring at each other, laughing together. I wanted to challenge myself to write a slow and soft story about the mood when two people spend time together”