beta
both the fl and ml are written very well. i love how their insecurities and/or shortcomings effect their dialogue/actions with each other in a natural way. for me, the atmosphere of this story is in a constant state of being underlyingly tense no matter how wholesome the scenes are. this might be how Maxi feels. both the ml and fl have their own unresolved traumas, so arranging two of these people together in a relationship perpetrates issues like self-doubt. Nonetheless, the fl and ml work to improve/build themselves individually, as well as supports/validates each other. This is a story of the process of mental healing over an extended amount of time. i also hope Maxi eats lots of good food to somehow reverse her malnutrition from her growing up in an abusive household.
Im reading mixed reviews in the comments, especially regarding two or so arcs. Is the story fun and satisfying?
yes, its really good. You should give it a try :))
YES!!! It's extremely good!
I'm always coming back to reread this!
I even went and bookmarked the beginning of each arc, so I can read whatever I'm in the mood for!
Out of curiosity, which arcs are you unsure of?
Just skip the time reset arc and you're golden