beta
1/10
Plot is dumb and stupid.
No likable characters all characters are shitty, dumb, toxic, and gay for the shitty toxic MC. (MC is like a self-insert character for the Author) I dont see anything likable trait from the MC not even once.
Sex scenes are too plain
-I dont mind the art at first but I can't help it. I dont like the artstyle
Spoiler
-Ah-in's body got bruises all over his body despite his body looking like a Body Builder? Wtf is this plot? Is he still being abused by old granny-o or grampy-o even though he's already an adult? He has the power to take a shit. Maybe the scars will become believable if the scars old not fresh right in the fresh stove
-tf holding that flashlight wrong