beta
This story isnt even mid...its below that...story could have a lot of potential if there werent any unnecessary random sex scenes of seme w 2 diff ppl at the start, dont understand how it ties to the story. Shouldve focused on THEIR story instead even more...the angst of them separating in detail, how they're both in lost and trying to find some light in the situation, then coming back to reunite again with misunderstanding...like this is the vibe that i get from the story something that should be heartwarming/a bit angsty/a bit sad...but not executed very well.....(but idk, maybe this was written way back so its not that developed? Ig like idk dont come for me pls )