whoever told me this was good you will pay.
rape bs aside, the plot is all twisted and tangled within the bad writing and lack of execution. the story had potential, but because of its sorry excuse for filler, character development, and relationship building it’s not doing it justice. i found the plot points interesting, having a complex life and intense longing to reconnect with your twin. then getting sucked into an illegal weapon industry scheme set up by the very uncle who was supposed to protect you. however… we ended up not getting any elaborate scene with the twins around their birthdays where it was emphasized the older twin WOULD reach out- but this was quickly brushed over. then with the uncle, mc’s reaction to being used/manipulated was so tame and a let down. i just get blueballed by the way the storylines are completed ??
don’t even get me started on how shallow mc’s relationship was with the twink, i swear their fondness for each other is forced by plot. in the same breathe, another forced aspect is ilay and mc’s fake complex relationship. because wdym you can’t find yourself hating him after he brutally sa’d you, killed several others terribly even though he was implied as the instigator, and treats you/everyone less than garbage…
not to mention, the author sliding in that the older twin brother created a detailed, fully fleshed out machine gun blueprint as a child LMAO??? THAT WAS SO POORLY PUT IN I CRIED LAUGHING
sooyoung was so dumb and starry eyed… i get he viewed jiwon differently and put him on a pedestal after the sa incident but in the same breathe ignored all the rumors/whispers and was less aware of his surroundings (the same black car following for months and not noticing). hyper vigilance and skepticism makes more sense than blissful ignorance. jiwon played him so easily
their sex was so real and authentic??? this is literally how fun and silly sex should be for first timers. i love how the author kept in how desperate and clueless both of them were. the foreplay was everything! lots of sex scenes make me cringe by how little prep there is and build up, so this was extremely refreshing and hot
the hyung really handed it to him straight unknowingly. seo-in doing all this unjustified revenge, raping the guy he loves, and being a pos to him all over ONE year of memories is fucking hilarious. he clearly knows something happened with yeongwoon‘s family, yet he’s only thinking me me me and not wondering what happened ??
seo-in you are pushing 30 obsessing over your gaymance with a person who never mistreated you or abandoned you out of free will in grade school!! the hyung has so much gain over him in terms of relationship depth and maturity. how is he the second ml…
im begging the comment section to do deep reflection before getting into a relationship if you really believe the fight was on equal grounds and worth the explosive yelling that came from yajima
someone admitting they were insecure and highly sensitive to one thing (sharing accomplishments), and that resulting in whining about the “comparison” over the actual issue is insane. im shocked some of you think torikai was saying they were similar too, when he was essentially only admitting the outcome terrified him so he’d rather suppress himself
i have empathy for both of them but clearly yajima was the main offender… getting compared to a shitty ex is nowhere near as hurtful as EXPERIENCING the shitty ex. and some of yall are misinterpreting torikai too. all he said was his past caused him to react this way and he was fearful… not that he was convinced yajima was the same??
yall lack compassion for someone who’s clearly still healing and traumatized. yajima’s reaction was straight up insensitive and didn’t match the weight of torikai’s confession. he made tk’s pain about himself and in the end he reinforced tk’s fears
that priest freak bitch and isekai’d demon ex need to pass away and burn in hell together. i am already dreading this season, knowing how much content the author explicitly draws for sa…
let sunwon and the king be happy PLEASE!!! them and the cute side couple have to end up happy and safe and healthy together when this finishes my god
this entire trope needs to stop, the character designs get worse and worse. mc looks like a child, his face could be put on a shorter model and he’d look that age. and the whole he’s so young and cute realization is…? then the ml is the size of a mma fighter who looks dilfy and smokes a pack of cigs a day
im so tired of the pretty, uwu small broke bottom x rich, selfish rapey overly big top. its a waste of good art and time
i hate when the wrong fujos act up in a comment section. omega verse takes inspo from straight sex and animal heats… it’s not that serious yall? hello?? just enjoy the damn smut and get over yourself
if you only enjoy abo when it’s a bl, YOU are a nasty fetishizer!! seek help
sometimes action bl is super underwhelming, does this one focus on building the plot and backstory
HES SUCH A GOOD BOY THIS IS CRAZY??? THE EYE ROLLING AND BEING SO WHINEY AND SUBMISSIVE. AND THEN THE BOTTOM HAVING ALL THE CONTROL??
NEED TO GET BOTH OF THEM PREGNANT
the whole premise is so fucking funny. joohyuk thinking sa is the solution to make them closer and threatening his social life. like yes let’s force him to do sexual acts and make him feel shitty every time we speak… what consequences will this have!! and thinking his feelings make up for the crimes committed against eun-oh
the saving part needed more content. whole chapter felt extremely rushed and didn’t match the build up it took to get there. i half thought it was a hallucination for chang-il to self soothe from the pain, and only realized it was real after he woke up on the bed with yona
these scenes always get to me... getting topped and dominated from the back too?? the mindless pleasure is like no other, it’s even better when the top is overstimulating you and can’t control themselves. what really ends it well is not pulling out and staying connected while sleeping, but you didn’t hear it from me !
i want to see their domestic life!!! how someone normal would operate around yazuka and if the ml gets babied too (most of the time mc was babied and doted on)
he’s so loud and touchy??? i love pretty and expressive tops, like when they get submissive and lose control PHEW
they made them so unnecessarily huge it reminds me of midoriya from mha. she’s gonna kill me with them laser beam glances O—O
she’s so understandable in the sense there’s no room for her freedom and happiness in a future she’s confined in. i don’t blame her for wanting no ties to any royalty or a noble family even if she gets to be alive because she’s lived two lifetimes of that and worse, and never got the chance to be selfish or live for herself even when she was so close to it
the more context i get on their relationship as a whole, the more im icked out by it… nothing is truly solved with honesty first, it’s always an event that forces them to spill and we get word vomit of their dying love for each other and it’s like okay? couples shouldn’t need to feel the lowest lows to get reassurance, it’s so emotionally draining and toxic
the fact they always wrap it up with sex too ?? like they need therapy more than cock and a fat ass to ram
im rooting for them because they represent a refreshing, new, and exciting relationship. i love a fine ass man like tj… but your first love is not gonna be the best person for you as both of you evolve. knowing the worst about a person and being there for it does not = them being the only lover that will understand and empathize with you, and that’s what i get from their relationship. im all for childhood friends to lovers, but trauma and all their hidden feelings bound them and overlaps their shared bond
with jo i get the feeling ian can breathe and move on from the past that haunts him, instead of relish in the comfort of someone who knows his deepest secrets but keeps him stagnant