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PerilsPride June 9, 2024 6:49 am

For those that liked this, just don't read this I'm just shitting on this comic.

Okay, uh pros about this comic - art style is decent
cons - literally everything else.

If you're someone who enjoys good storytelling this probably isn't for you because this shit is incoherent at best. This takes the toxic alpha trope fucking mars dear god did I want Keith to stfu at every point in this comic. I guess if you're only here for smut you might like this but it's pretty hard when half the time it is just rape and s/a.

The main character, idk his name because god damn is he forgettable, was just a victim and like I wanna talk shit about him but i'd feel bad because he just got abused the entire comic and still had Keith's kid? bro's taking all the L's. Also his revenge plot came out of nowhere, one of the many instances of "great storytelling."

Honestly the last like 10-15 chapters were nonsense and made my head hurt and guess what, the main guy still gets with the literal turd with legs that is Keith in the end and they say a bunch of hollow sappy "I love you shit" that doesn't change the fact that Keith is a massive piece of shit that raped and lowkey abused the main guy up until like 5 chapters before the end.

tl:dr
don't bother, story is shit, smut was okay, t/w for rape and s/a

PerilsPride July 18, 2021 8:11 pm

If it's got yankee in the title I'm there

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