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I should have read the comments before reading this. At first I thought with 69 chapters it might be a comparatively short and simple story but what was THIS!!???
Who TF was the mage Noe?? Why did he want to resurrect the dragon?? What deal did he make with the queen?? Also it took me so long to realise that the dragon was the in the subconscious and she killed him in an instant?? Atleast put up a fight bruh. There's so many things wrong with this I could go on and on.
Also I expected the Helena/dante to look different cause the cover and her past self looked so much more badass. I would've preferred she'd be born looking like her past self and then have a story with the ML.
16 chapters in and I just want to know if her feelings towards her brother become better or not?
Ik ray looks naive but he's also just a kid unlike Dorothy who has been reborn. Idk if he knows the full extent to how the father treats Dorothy but he tries to lover her in his own way. She just seems to ignore him most of the time and doesn't seem to empathize with her brother that the role of king to a child might seem really scary and daunting. I just hope she actually appreciates her brother ;-;
COPY PASTING MY REPLY FROM ANOTHER SIMILAR COMMENT CAUSE I DONT WANNA WRITE AGAIN LOL. BUT YES IT GETS BETTER
tbh i get it, i dont like her hate, but i also dont blame her. from her pov i totally get why she stays away from him. their relationship JUST started getting better around chapter like 50 but i do hope she opens her heart more to him. sometiems even i feel like shes too cold hearted, but i can never blame her. shes suffered too much cause of her father, and has severe trust issues from past life. tbh she really needs therapy loll