Hes way to nice and trusting, like fr hes gonna die if someone just pretends to be funny then get close to him and kill him. Like what defenses does he have at least have defenses for incoming ppl???
Thats where A1 come in ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Like seriously I can tell that ur literally breaking each chapter into 10 parts. Stop dragging it out, if the story is coming to an end let it end and work on something else. Reading these chapters are like listening to a 10 sec video with 10 parts and only one convo.
This has alot of potential, great art, good story currently, but then again the update time is long so idk.