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I wish this author would portray women more realistically. Even in Lookism majority of the girls were all unbelievably hot when both Lookism and this manhwa is supposed to be breaking stereotypes of the big strong handsome guy/petite slender pretty girl being successful, but the author just keeps using these hot girls as a way to show that the loser guy is successful. Gets boring and predictable. If there’s a new loser guy joining the gang I’ll bet my ass the author will fashion up another hot girl for that loser guy.
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You sound like the type to be hurt easily by criticizm. Nobody says the author can’t continue drawing the way he does, right? I’m criticizing him and his predictable plots, not threatening him to change with a knife. He can draw as he wishes, I can criticize as I wish too.
Btw if you can draw a traditionally ugly guy you can draw a traditionally ugly girl — he’s done it once in Lookism.
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Your not criticizing the plot but how the characters look. Your one of those Tumbler people aren't you. You would scream at people that the woman aren't realistic at all but then turn around and think that how the men are portrayed is PERFECTLY fine. As an artist myself, I know that criticism is needed but not this type. We can portray characters how we want to its ART, but you don't see it that way do you? You see it as only a representation rather than just a fictional story.
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OK Miss Artist with the substandard English. You guys are way too sensitive to criticism LMAO it’s almost like you guys are the people you’re describing? I said my opinion, you guys keep acting like I put a gun to the artist’s head. And nah you ain’t an artist, whaddya mean that criticism of this type is not needed? It’s a plot problem ya dumbass. Ya think people won’t get bored of you repeatedly using the whole “loser guy gets hot chick” as the only story you know how to write?
No one is saying the artist draws ugly and needs to do better. It’s that he repeatedly uses the lame ass story of “loser guy can get hot girl too!” and *whoosh fighting scenes*. If you and NellyWumbo are so scared of criticism and need to block it out, idk how yall survive in the outside world.
(Btw, did you draw one anime eye on your notebook paper and have now decided to proclaim that you’re an artist? LMAO)
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You dead ass criticized the art in your first comment, when someone else told you off you changed your words. It's okay to criticize the plot and art, you know in a way so that they can make it better. If you haven't noticed, anime in general is automatically incorrect. The eyes are WAY too big, the hair colors are abnormal and the personality themselves aren't exactly normal either. And no I am not claiming to be a professional artist. What I'm talking about us what I learned in two years in art class. Do you hate Van Goph? Oh I bet you really hate that guys art work after all the skys don't even look like normal. Or what about Jojo Bizare Adventure? Have you seen those freaks of nature? But guess what? Everyone enjoys his art work even though its characters are abnormal.
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Are you not a fluent English speaker? You seem to be deliberately missing my point. NOBODY IS TALKING ABOUT ART. Why not you go get a dictionary to understand what I'm saying before replying. It's fine if you're not fluent in English, but you can't expect me to keep a conversation with you when you aren't even getting what I'm saying.
No ya dumbass, it's not an art style problem. It's a plot problem at the bottom of it all even though it seems like it's an art style problem. You can't tell me this author has diversity when it comes to drawing men but somehow he can only draw hot girls.
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Not you changing your words when you literally said, “I wish this author would portray women more realistically. Even in Lookism majority of the girls were all unbelievably hot when both Lookism.” You’re implying that their looks shouldn’t be like that, when it’s just the authors art style. We get that you’re trying to “criticize” how the author portrays women when it’s not even that big of a deal. You do realize this story is still in the beginning stage right? And why are you avoiding the actual argument and going after our grammar lmao? Is that all you can do to rebuttal?
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You say it’s not a big deal the author portrayal women unrealistically yet you get mad at me for having an opinion... like OK LMAO why would you contradict yourself so plainly?
I’m not changing my words. What don’t ya get, Squidy? Lemme guess, you’ve never had any experience in art before, right? Ask any college comics and animation major and I guarantee you, they will understand that this is an underlying problem. An art problem is when I dislike the author’s general way of drawing, I have no problem with his way of drawing. He can draw ugly girls and he can draw cute girls. He just doesn’t ever draw ugly girls and it gets really cliched and boring that there’s a whole harem of hot girls which is jarring.
Of course I’m going after that kid’s grammar, if you aren’t fluent in English how tf are you going to get my point? Both of you keep going in roundabouts because you got affronted by me having an opinion. IDK how you guys will survive if some internet stranger asking for a less cliched manga pisses you off so much.
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I understand when you are saying when you say something is clicched. However if you have a problem with every story that the author makes then don't read any of their stories. Also, there is no wrong on drawing aall your characters hot/beautiful/handsome. In fact the MC stands out more when he is surrounded by people like that. And no, I am not pissed off at you for criticizing the story rather I'm pissed off at you because of your SJW view on what artist can and can not portray FICTIONAL characters.
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Started off OK, second ML was annoying but still alright. Then from Chap 8 or so the pacing started getting bad and the cliches mounted.
I mean, their fight was so unrealistic. It really just came out of nowhere since there was no conflict prior to that and suddenly they're falling apart. And then suddenly there's this guy who wants to molest him...? They're HS kids, considering the context and the culture, the perpetrator has a LOT to lose since he'll be branded as the homosexual. Then the ML comes out of nowhere, saves him and then they kiss. I'm more surprised that during the drinking game ML didn't do the cliche and drink for him.
Art though is pretty.
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Am I the only one getting tired of manhwas portraying the uke/bottom as some bug-eyed, tiny garden gnome that looks smaller than even the female characters and the seme being some small-eyed, overly buff and gigantic dude? Even for manga standards it's just so unrealistic that it becomes jarring. Why the uke here looking like Flik from A Bug's Life while the seme looking like he came from Jojo?
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right especially the seme being oversized and muscly am i the only one that found it unattractive? hes so muscly that his back is bent ohhh i hate them ones that there back are bent! and its ok for the uke to have a bigger dick than the seme in not by force for the uke to have a small dick and the seme a big one like make it reasonable if you wanna go down that path.
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Meh, the fujoshis on this site ship Jisoo x K (blondie) because it's a fetish instead of that K is some great guy. I mean K literally has been introduced as someone who sleeps around with many people and has a fetish for virgins (read: very likely younger boys) and you guys find him a better option than an oblivious uke?
Come on. Y'all like K x Jisoo only because it fulfills that forbidden gay love fetish of yours. Like... girls I know gay love is sexy and all but keep your hormones down, not every character has to fuck each other just because they're males. Let Jisoo go and find some guy/girl that appreciates him. K is shady as fuck, uke is dumb as hell. Y'all shouldn't think Jisoo can only settle down with just them two.
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And what do you think you're doing? You also think gay love is sexy if not you wouldn't even be reading anything on this website. You think talking down to us doesn't make you the same as the rest of us. It makes you look like a self righteous critiquing hypocrite others when you're doing the same as the rest of us
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You talk about girls and their gay love fetish. What does that make you then? You read yaoi on this website just like the rest of us. Do you think because you're critiquing us and talking down that makes you different from us? And what's with the insulting tone when you say girls? Bitch you're also a girl. It's kinda hard not to come across as a huge hypocrite when you're on a website that's dedicated to gay porn.
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Oh that's kinda weird coming from someone reading yaoi... First, there's no way you'd read this if you didn't find this sexy and atractive somehow, bcause it's supposed to be exciting.
If it's a fetish or not, I don't think is so simple to imply it like that, specially because you're based on the idea that this is wrong and negative. I think this requires much more discution than just assuming precociously "fujoshi girls have fetish with gay man".
Btw, when people read stories ofc they'll have opinions about it (because It's OBVIOUS we want things to happen as we want), includding yours. But the way u expressed your opinion made u seem like you're superior. Next time, try not to sound so agressive (It's a constructive criticism).
Ps: Just liked your comment because I agree Jisoo deserves someone better
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ANYWAY LMAO LOOK AT EVERYONE SO TRIGGERED BY MY OPINION, girls, y'all wearing the shoe because the shoe fits.
people can have opinions OK? you can't just read something that you don't like and then go "OMG GET IT AWAY FROM ME YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO SAY THAT!!!!". i don't like where this story is going, but i'd never have the entitlement you kids have to say "GET THIS MANGA OFF THIS SITE!!!!"
so chill ya preteen girls, how ya gonna survive in real life if you get so offended by a comment that you demand people not to say anything?
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I meant to say it's weird coming from someone who reads yaoi because you already know many of them are supposed to be sexy and explicity. I didn't imply in any part that yaois can't have good plots ??, I actually prefer those (but again, that's just opinions, you can't decide what is good or not).
And as I've said before, fetishisim is something way more complicate to explain in a comment and I don't think I have a opinion about right now.
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Omg you're the only one getting triggered here. You were the first just attacking other people's opinion, implying that it's their fetish, what right do you have to say that? Gezz, not that a felt offended by what u said (I don't look for fights on intenet) I just said you expressed your opinion in a bad way.
I also said I agreed with u about the story/caracters, so u're the one being rude for no reason
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Not really I created the account to reply to another dumbass then I saw your comment. You're doing the same thing again though insulting girls when you're a girl yourself? Or do you just hate yourself for being a woman? Yaoi is a genre meant to fetishize gay relationships. Most people read it just for the porn. Or do you think if you call others a fetishist that magically doesn't make you one anymore?
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There are many yaois that have good plots but no matter what they still fetishize gay men. Since it's created by straight or bisexual women for other women. You can either acknowledge and continue reading it or stop reading it since you don't want to read something that fetishizes gay men. If you want realistic stories that don't fetishize gay men, then read something made by actual gay men instead of just fetishists.
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People need to stop equating a not-fully-happy ending with that the story is bad. It's precisely because the author didn't decide to entertain and make you guys go away with "aww" for the sake of you guys being pleased that makes it clear the author values quality. It's a shame the readers here can't appreciate that non-happy endings do not necessarily mean a story is bad. This story was great, yes there were plot holes, yes I felt like it could have been shorter, but there was absolutely nothing wrong with the ending. Hana was not going to randomly have a threesome with Jiyeon and Jiho. Nor was Jiyeon going to randomly fall in love and solve all her problems when she tried to commit suicide out of her love for Hana.
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Kinda meh about how they keep trying to force the romance... I think it can wait, they're just kids, it's not exactly exciting to watch an 8 year old swoon over a 4 year old (or however old Lippe is). I'd rather just watch her outsmart adults than watch every male child swoon over an adult in a female preschooler's body lol
This author truly has the best female leads and plot. A Stepmother's Märchen was so good as well. Out of all the isekai mangas which eventually devolve into a reverse harem and the whole plot is just a vehicle for *~romance~*, this author really makes the plot and characters so good