This was really cute and I loved the flow in the earlier chapters. But later it got kind of dragged out and overly dramatic. It also should have had maybe 1 or 2 more chapters to wrap the story up and some aftermath. I just think it could have been done much better but I like the start of the story a lot!
Why do y'all keep commenting about ZoSan on a ZoLu doujinshi?? Just go to your precious ZoSan doujins and comment there about your love for your ship if you can't deal with Zoro being with someone else. You're ruining the mood in the comments. I wanted to see love for this ship but all I see is "ZoSan!!" or "wut Luffy seme?? No ew" ...
I actually prefer Luffy on top 'cuz when he's a bottom he's usually way too timid, cute and out of character.
Whenever this updates it's the highlight of the day.
I never get tired of these two. The main story should honestly end though, or else it will become a milking mess like honto yajuu. But I could probably read endless of extra stories and pointless fluff with these two...
I guess I don't understand because I like both?? I hope they both never end
I like the main story but they have already told enough of their story imo. By continuing it they will continue to milk it and bring in new characters only to cause drama... etc. It becomes boring and repetitive. Don't want it to become like that.
Am I the only one who cringe to the gods when they grope the uke's chest like it's a boob??
The story just rubs me the wrong way. Not because of the cheating itself, but the way it was handled. I also don't really think there was a point to the story, or message to deliver. The only thing I got from it was that they "matured" together? Which I don't think is true in this case. They didn't even really have any kind of conversation with each other about what happened, they just spent some time apart and then got back together again. In order to gain back trust you'll need to talk about it!! A lot!! And they didn't. Sure, one of them might have had some thoughts in his head about why he ended up cheating, but he didn't express any of that to his partner...
A break up would have been much more realistic and satisfying, tbh!
I diiid like how they were a reversible couple tho, the only good thing about this story lol
Ugh... seems like there will be drama. Just why? All I want to see is them coming out to their parents and then living together happily ever after and cute moments. Not stupid drama. This manga is so good and such a gem, why ruin it by milking the story with dumb drama? Arrrghhh I'm mad...
I'm interested in the concept of the story, but the execution of it is kind of boring and needs way more chapters to be fully explored. Plus, the uke is kind of a push over, which is a big turn off for me.
A dominant uke who who actually STAYS dominant throughout the whole manga? So rare! Ah, this was such a nice read...