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I don't usually enjoy giving a bad critique for a story I enjoy, but this was bad! The story was good, the characters were interesting and the backstory worthy of becoming a good comic. However, here I am seeing the quality of the story decreasing, up to the last page. They left way too many unresolved plots, wrapped it up too fast, and the drawings felt rigid on the last couple of chapters. Even the dialogue progression felt unnatural.
Once again, I loved Maeva and Haruk UP UNTIL they were banished. From that point on, the comic/webtoon lost quality and appeal. I sincerely hope the author and illustrator will do better down the line for whatever project they pick up
I believe this comic is adapted from a novel- so you can probably find the satisfaction you are looking for from that! I get what you mean, it’s a bit like when a book is made into a movie! So much is cut!!! Anyway I think the novel is on tapas.ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
THAT COLUMN WRITING BROKE MY EYES! The illustrator used greek characters to spell english words! AND IN BOTH LANGUAGES IT HURT MY EYES!!!!!!