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Why do I feel like chapter 1 just called me out.
Like a boulder of shame just slammed down, cracked then crumbled.
Seriously, my parents are even worried about me now.
(T_T) also because my found out about my naked Solas body pillow cover. I SWEAR THAT WAS A B-GIFT FROM SESSH!! AND BESIDES HAVE YOU PLAYED DRAGON AGE! I NEEDED COMPENSATION AFTER MY FIRST PLAY THROUGH AND ROMANCING SOLAS!!
Seriously, being single in your 30's is embarrassing.
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I'm not dissing this comic. The art is great and there is a story.
But being female I am 100% sure this is not how vaginas or female arousal work. We don't just see a big sick and are like "oooooh" I know I am lvl 77 to achieve but just knowing what it is like to have one. We don't just.
Listen, all of you males reading. Please only see this as a fantasy and don't think or TEXT a girl with this in mind. This is only fiction enjoy it but in real life wiiiiiill only have a 2% chance of happening and that is if she's getting something from you or has so low self esteem she feels she has to act this way to get any approval. And if the latter is true and you take advantage then yeah shame the fuck on you. You're a piece of shit.
That being said this has some legit funny crude jokes here. I literally skip the sex scene because I know I am not the target audience, and that is 100% O.K.
But there is a story here. If they can just focus a tiny bit more on it.

Ok I do like the story that aside.
Major loop hole. (I'm not done reading yet) but from the beginning I'm like "..........um. A.) Turn off your GPS locarion B.) Turn off your microphone. C.) Report the App"
I did the first 2 when Facebook and search engine apps and Ad took my privacy too far. Yeah, you wonder how you can talk about something and before you know it there is an AD just geared toward your conversation. Once I turned it all of those ADs stopped. I'm no longer on Facebook and I no longer use Amazon. And it's been peace and quiet ever since.

I'm kinda interested in seeing where this is going.
Needs a link to where I can support the artist.

I can tell this is the artist first comic.
I won't be harsh in my review. They had everything to make this comic good. But couldn't quite stick the landing. They also need to work on background art.
The characters need more development because it feels like. This is person A and That is persons B and C. And they fall in love just because. It doesn't really focus on the development of each characters relationship. And the characters can't develop because they have no character. The ending was just written just so the artist could be done with it. I give them kudos they stuck with the comic until the end, but the ending shows you there was no investment on Artist part.
I'm not mad about the editing, because I know how are it is to find editors. And I'm not mad about the artwork because there alot of comics with crappy artwork that are still successful. The reason why they are successful is because the artist is properly able to the story. They planned ahead and didn't go with the moment.
I dunno, that just my criticism. I don't want rip the artists soul out and shout slander at them. I just wanted to give useful criticisms. And besides this isn't tso bad that I can't help myself. Nah, that is for that tumor face horror comic. Lmao wtf is that even XD

The memes in between are annoying. Like, for reals. Cut that shit out. I know you are trying to insert your relation with us with reading it. But in EVERY COMIC YOU EDIT you fail.
We are reading and getting into the mood of the comic. And this stupid shit shows up.
It's like having sex and looking up and finding you significant other is making a cross eyed face and doing the "omguuuuurd" sound. It literally ruins everything you were trying to by build up. I have made it a point that when I see these I don't want to read them anymore I I do KNOWING that this comic will keep popping up on my notifications l. And I will ignore it.
Taking good ass comics and just freaking ruining it.
What is wrong with you? This isn't Ru Paul's Amazing drag race. Nobody wants your 2 cents in between clips...sorry chapters.
Sorry, but this particular edit style just crossed over my line.

This is literally my favorite out of the Niyama collection.

Seriously, is this just never going to be updated again?