beta
Okay this story was good but holy frick is this rushed. Feels like they are no not even feels they are actively trying to end the story but realised they put in to much content and set up and now they have to rush through to get to the happy ending.
Navia getting tped to nowhere and randomly coming down from the sky was what did it for me.
Like it isn't a bad story the art is pretty and i like the ML but it's so obviously wanted to be a short story but was forced to be elogated with a dramatic plot that never got the tone of the story. Eventually needing to be closed out much faster than prepared for.