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The very end was so sweet it actually made me tear up!
Apart from that. What can I say. Some moments felt a bit rushed or messy, but not enough for me to put down the story for good. A couple eye watering moments, and a couple scenes (especially near the end) that made me skip/skim through the chapter(s). After they got together I became a little restless with the story.
The younger sister? Incredibly annoying. My, were there some plot twists in this.
Not a horrible read. Can read this when bored, but if you have a list I'd say it wouldn't hurt to read whatever on your list first.
Skinny guy a weirdo, and jerk. No hesitation to hook up with his friends sister, or even have the decency to ya know, leave her alone when she's already getting with the tan one.
Just yuck. And girls don't get wet that fast. Maybe some do, but not enough to soak the entire floor in the area around your body. That's just crazy