beta
The only reason I’m sad about seeing so many side characters is because the main plot hasn’t even been finished yet and we just got a relationship from the main couple, so many things are happening to the point of me forgetting what this story is even about (it took a comment reminding me that the mc is quite literally an ex gang member).
Where’s the crazy brother?
Why is he so obsessed with the mc?
What will happen to the mc once he finally gains freedom from his brother?
All of these questions could honestly be answered if the author just stayed on track lol.
The main couple barely has any appearances and I honestly know more about the side characters than I know about these two, who JUST started dating mind you.
This side characters could’ve easily been added when everything was done and the main couple was more established and seasoned.
We’re so far into the second season and I feel as though the main plot has been completely abandoned.
Don’t get me wrong I enjoy the happy vibes and the in depth side stories I think it really showcases the author’s versatility when it comes to writing, BUT the structure of it all is off putting