beta
I feel like the author was too busy trying to establish the dynamics between Idris and the prince, and now the chemistry between Idris and Zin is quite stale. There is no relationship between them besides commander and subordinate, and they also occasionally have sex. We are 47 chapters in and we have yet to see any sort of mutual romance between them, and I’m pretty sure this is the first time they’ve had fully consensual sex now, which is crazy to me. I just feel like the substance of the story is slowly dwindling away, and it’s starting to frustrate me lol.