I don't feel that much spark after reading the story but at least their daughter is happy, the seme had been kind of a jerk in the past, he could've asked uke for an explanation but overall i rate this story a 6/10
Hmm.. It's good but I think it's missing something, like I don't feel the spark at all but it's pretty good
It lacks development and actual dialogue between mc and ml, there was little to none between their meeting and confession, I was honestly surprised at how lackluster and rushed it is considering the first chapter was well written imo
Nahh, I feel bad for the one with glasses dude, he got fucked mercilessly that his ass started to bleed
Huh!??
Uke will get fucked mercilessly in the next chapters.
Hellp I read it on bato in a diff language omgoodness that was disgusting the blood was leaking out his ass
Fr
If I was Naui I'd actually be pissed too. ╥﹏╥