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this is probably the first manga i ever thought about dropping. the very first scene of this manga (like very first, like prologue first) is very misleading. the younger seme seems more confident and is actually perusing the MC in the beginning but in the actual story, all he does is bitch and complain to the MC.
the MC had made it clear multiple time what he wants. he doesn’t want romance he wants to win, this is a fatal flaw to the story too. It’s a romance story but its kinda hard to write romance when the mc’s goal is no where even close to romance. its okay to have your MC have multiple goals but this MC just seems to want to win and isn’t even interested in the a relationship.
the producer at first seemed sus in the beginning but now is potentially a main love interest. this is frustrating because its obvious the MC is going to go for the younger one. As much as i love the producer I would’ve preferred him to be a big antagonist instead a perfectly good love interest that is going to lose to a whiny brat.
you can tell the author is trying to change the tone of the manga as well. They do well with it, but I think maybe they reached a point where its this awkward comedy drama. If they wanted to turn a more serious note they should bring something serious to the table, the dramatic atmosphere they are trying to present doesnt match up to the loss the MC will have if he loses. ( i know losing a cat is sad but with the tone becoming more serious it doesnt add up, in fact a side characters fake/made up backstory fit better) I dont know much about the character to have this intense feeling the author is trying to give to me.
It was a yaoi/bl manga. It starts off with the Uke and Seme almost having a one night stand. The uke in the past was actually raped by woman and ever since he would go to gf to gf and use them for a house and food.
the Seme is the owner of a fashion design company and only sleeps with people only once. but is attracted to the uke. so instead of a one nignht stand he lets the uke stay at his house and be his assisstant.
itslater reavealed the seme and hjs father had a falling out and such and then his father was sick.
thats really all i know if anyone knows what manga this is please let me know ot woukd mean alot thank you.
i found it. its "hollow lovers" guys XD
He acts completely different in the prologue/very beginning of the story. Seriously, just go and read the very first chapter/pages. I prefer this version a lot better, we probably would've gotten a different story if The author kept with this type of character.
The character we see in the beginning is this 'jerk', logical and charismatic character that seems like he is actually involved in-the bgp plan despite not liking it. I can see this going in a more interesting direction where the character uses to bgp as an excuse to get close to the mc which can create dramatic and even hilarious moments and an interesting dynamic. Smug uke is the brains of the operation as the main seme has good charisma to pull it off.
The character portrayed tho actually in the story is....none of these things. Its like the author scrapped the character and put all his good characteristics into another character (the producer. He is smug, jerk like but charismatic) this is why the readers like the producers so much because its supposed to be 'him' the main love interest in the very beginning of the story. The main love-interest now though, it feels like he lost all personality, he has no goal, no personality. The only time we get anything remotely close is when he's drunk.
This definitely would've been a totally different story if the author kept with the original character from the beginning. That character was the reason I, personally, added this story to my reading list.