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I mean, it's not *bad* but it's also not *good*.
Nice for a first Manga of this topic but if you've already read a few of these kinds of Mangas this one comes off as very childish and the pacing is a bit off because everything is happening way too quickly. I mean it's a nice change from 200 chapters and no progress but still, there's gotta be balance.
I think she's been in her new world for less then a month and she's already basically got the love of the ML, made a pact with dwarves and faries when it hasn't been done in decades, also the two events she's been to she's basically left in the first 30 minutes.
Also she's lowkey done nothing to gain everyone's trust but somehow did so in basically a day and (as someone else mentioned it) it seems like she expects everyone to instantly treat her differently while she's simultaneously acknowledging that the previous Villain was... *a Villain*.
TBH she's coming off a bit like a Mary Sue self insert.