LOL "His type is ...a sadist" he just left everything else out lmaoo
Hm we could make the ml a kind, caring considerate guy OR what about an actual dog guy. Woof woof bark bark it is
she shoulda just said it flat out that he makes her nauseous lol
I find the pacing and sequence of events a lil weird these few chapters. like what, window breaks then why does ash grab her and run? And wow how convenient theres some house or building for them to go into, then wow convenient conflict bad people immediately find them. like ??? It's like they wanted the first time he finds her to be her crying and holding ash to make it more dramatic or something but I think the sequence of events just come out forced and awkward
Ash grabs her cause the pheromones they’re releasing were too much for vivi that’s why ash bolted with her..
Did....... did you even actually read the chapters?
Yep and Im saying I found it forced and convenient lol
going back to reread it another time and the pacing is a mess imo lol. Probably why it gave off that forced and convenient feeling to me
Wow I think they made both twins kinda unlikeable. I don't really care for them tbh lol
Hahaha no matter how good the art, I cant take the plots seriously.
It's like you're introducing entirely new characters, setting up the premise, gotta have some sort of plot or conflict, resolve it and have the characters fuck all in one chapter
Kinda a recipe for disaster in my opinion, but I do salut the artists who took the challenge lol
That’s literally what it is. Different one shot story’s every chapter with smut
thats what it is.. its a different story every chapter
Yes, I know what it is so I said what it is and that it's a disaster lmao
lmao I clicked on chapter 123, saw the first page and was lik ?? Is this the wrong manga? lol
woah, an update!! Time to reread lol