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Is it just me or is this dude like really fu¢king annoying at the start? I'm still at the starting of the story but his priorities and ability to feel compassion is completely fu¢ked.
he definitely changes over time, and it’s clear a lot of his attitude stems from his trauma, but for me personally that sort of characterization is quite compelling as he is thrust into a role where he has to care. or at least pretend to.
The pacing is kinda wonky. He's mentioned talking to the king, around 5+ times within 18 chapters, about the issues he sees among the citizens but there's no conclusion to that but I only see him getting it on, like all the time. I know that SA can screw with a person's mentality but there can be more depth to his character other than just thinking about f#cking all the time. It feels like the author was searching for a traumatic reason for him to be hypersexual and stuck with that instead of expanding on him as a person. He's had many chances to talk to the king but somehow he never manages to cuz the king is hot?! Like what?
Its actually really good i swear! The start was just really uhmmmmmm on the rougher side but as you go on it gets good hehhee ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Yeah it gets way better as you go, trust I was in the same boat as you and literally dropped this story for a couple of months bc it just seemed like another one of those bland sex stories with no plot but I’m glad I came back, the art got better, the plot got better, and I love that there is actually a romance aspect to the story (aka Albis and Sunwon).
There's just far too much going on in barely 12 chapters I'm getting confused in some places and downright not understanding the story. Murder, cultists, arson, college drama, random people giving random warnings for no reason, searching for some man, another man being a mysterious witness to the MC's past. All this could have been revealed in a better place in about 30 chapters or so.