Ignoring the spoilers(like wtfff??) I am having more fun with this than I expected. The ml is actually unhinged and I like the mcs personality so far as well. Hope whatever has been written below is not how it will actually go lol
Just to double check: the black haired guy is a gang leader and was shot, he then meets white haired dude and it later turns out that they are both in the same class. Also the reason gang dude is there is to lay low. Did I get that correctly?
yep
Had potential and I enjoyed the art for the most part, but this story has severe pacing and writing issues. I was honestly a bit shocked that this is an adaption and not just someone being good at art but bad at writing a story.
The artstyle has potential but then you have the jumpscare dicks and I’m sorry but some of their general positions look so off. In the second chapter where the ml closes the door and looks like a Sasquatch getting caught in the act? Yeah that’s where I lost it.
Anyways writing wise this one has a strong fanfiction touch to it, but I am a sucker for tattoos and gangster stories sooooooo……
Tongue piercing and the tattoos had me so excited and then the art was a bit…. Off? And the story is meh so far, my bad for having too high expectations there
I was quite excited when they introduced the safe word, but of course these types of stories never miss a chance to step all over the wishes of the bottom.
The suicide baiting part was out of nowhere and is such a toxic thing to say. Even as a throw away line or out of anger it just damages the relationship soooo much also it felt out of character for him to say so idk why that was added. What made it even worse was the „let’s have angry sex instead of communication“ right afterwards. Idk about anyone else but if my partner told me they might kill themselves if I ever leave then the follow up to that is certainly not sex.
I know the mcs name is Yo but everyone I read it it sounds like Aki is going for some really lame rap
Laughed out loud on the lame rap ahaha I thought he was too old to the point he’s doing that
Trying to fit in with the younger generation haha
Same....
Such a breath of fresh air! The story is intriguing and the art is wonderful!